College Writing I

Class Site for Ariana Paliobagis’ Fall 2007 English 121 at Montana State University

Posting15– Response to Mariko’s Intro and Conclusion December 11, 2007

Filed under: Assignments, Uncategorized — GulyarKuirexi @ 10:52 am

I really like Mariko’s intro and conclusion. When I read your intro I feel it is interesting and it makes me want to read through her paper. This intro catches my attention, in your intro she shows us the same things between humans and what make us different. At the end she gives us the solution. And I agree with your opinion. I think you did a great job in your conclusion paragraph, I also think people should not raise bias just because social status, races, cultures, or religious.