I chose david luce’s intro and conclusion.
I disagree that many americans believe that a democratic capitalist society is the best way to govern. I would like to see facts or data supporting that idea. I would definately remove the “we”s from your paper and possibly fix sentence structure of the 3rd or 4th sentence in. Lots of the word “Americans” when it’s people are not always to blame. Public opinion needs to be expressed differently then you have it in your paper. I know it’s your ideas, but you should think about your ideas carefully and make sure that they are what you really think. Cultures are all different, but people require structure. I know for a fact that our government is not the greatest in the world unless the criteria for that is our GDP or our greed. Based on happiness the United states isn’t ranked within the top 100 nations. Denmark and Sweden hold top countries. Anywho i hope the paper went well for ya. Sry the criticism was late and not exactly constructive…. I just wanted to make you think a bit.
